Forum:Rate my twilight deck

Please! I really need help with this deck and I want to know what you guys think.

Main Deck (45 cards):

Monsters (32):

Black Luster Soldier - Envoy of the Beginning 1x; Chaos Sorcerer 1x; Lightpulsar Dragon 2x; Darkfalre Dragon 2x; Judgment Dragon 3x; Herald of Creation 1x; Honest 1x; Eclipse Wyvern 2x; Gorz, The Emissary of Darkness 1x; Necro Gardna 3x; Sangan 1x; Tour guide 2x; d.d. crow 2x; celsetia, lightsworn angel 1x; lumina, lightsworn summonner 2x; ryko, lightsworn hunter 2x; lyla, lightsworn sorcerer 2x; jain, lightsworn paladin 1x; ehren, lightsworn monk 1x; garoth, lightsworn warrior 1x;

spells (11):

solar recharge 3x; dark hole 1x; allure of darkness 1x; heavy storm 1x; monster reborn 1x; charge of the light brigade 1x; burial from a different dimension 1x; monster reincarnation 1x; magical stone excavation 1x;

traps (02):

royal decree 1x; return from the differentt dimension 1x;

Extra deck (03):

Leviair, the sea dragon 3x;

side deck (07):

effect veiler 3x; jinzo 2x; card trooper 2x;

Please: rate, tell me your opinion and tell me what do you think I should take out or put. And sorry if I misspelled anything.

Use a Template:Decklist, if you just list cards on a page, they'll appear as a long paragraph, and no one wants to comb through that. ---Dark Ace SP (Talk) 12:56, October 11, 2012 (UTC)

Well, the first and most obvious advice is to reduce the size of your deck to 40 cards. I'd reduce the number of J. Dragons, Necro Gardnas, D. D. Crows and Lyla's. Secondly you should fill out your Extra Deck with Rank 3 and Rank 4 Xyz monsters. Even if you don't use them much, the extra bit of variety will help. Next, I would not use Allure of Darkness in a deck that's only 50% Dark monsters, much less one the relies heavily on monsters being in the Graveyard. Lastly, put Royal Decree into your Side Deck. It isn't helpful without the support of the Jinzo's. --Eps01 (talk • contribs) 13:30, October 11, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry about the template. I am new on this wiki thing. I have made some some changes to the deck (please, continue giving advices and ratings). Main Deck: 40 cards; Extra Deck: 15 cards; Side Deck:11

--Arack1516 (talk • contribs) 22:27, October 15, 2012 (UTC)

It's better now, but I'm not sure you'll get much use out of Celestia or Herald of Creation. I'd replace them for 1 Dark monster and a Lightsworn that's easier to summon. --Eps01 (talk • contribs) 07:00, October 16, 2012 (UTC)