Editing Forum:I know i need plauge but is this a competitive zombie deck?

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here is my decklist zombie world X3 enemy conroller X2 book of life X 2 one duality one solidarity a heavy storm a monster reborn a dark hole and an mst those r the spells traps include wabaku X2 call of the haunghted X2 one magic drain one ultimate offering one trap of the imperial tomb a mirror force a defense draw a torrential a raigeki break and a t roar now monsters pyimid turtle X3 zombie master X 3 ryu kokki x 2 il blud X2 two vampire lords two palidin of cursed dragon a red eyes zombie dragon spirit reaper partrition o darkness melevelent mech goku en vampires curse and a red ogre any help would be much obliged

the deck is 45 cards and it is very fun but is it competitive enough to beat the top tiers?

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:Why is there an [[Ultimate Offering]]? Isn't the deck focused on Special Summoning? - [[User:Silver Glaceon|<span style="color:LightSlateGray;">Silver</span>]] [[User_talk:Silver Glaceon|<span style="color:MediumBlue;">Glaceon</span>]] @ 05:50, October 14, 2011 (UTC)

I'm just a random contributer here and when it comes to these help things, I am often not the best person to seek advice from (since I'm a total duel hipster) but I'll tell ya what I think you don't need at least. First off methinks you don't need 3 Z worlds, if it's that important add a [[Terraforming]]. Magic Drain is situationaly good so if you plan on special summoning alot from the grave, then using a card as simple as like [[Magic Jammer]] works or try and get something that can cover more then only spells; ask what is your goal when negating spells and apply a correct trap. Imperial tomb is also lackluster but with the monster you run 1 is just fine. If defence draw is only there to get a card you would place on top with plaguespredder then fine, if not then there are so many better choices. 2 Waboku's and a roar is excessive, you lack removal cards and effect protection, with solidarity you cover battle saftey decently so branch out. 2 Vampire lords is kinda much, Bluds and Curse is kinda much you don't need all that. Try getting [[Mezuki]] and [[Goblin Zombie]]...maybe a [[Shutendoji]] if you really want it. Uh not important but here's a time thingy 11:00 PM 10/13/11 Oh and yeah Offering is poinless like the guy above said. Not bad but I wouldn't say competetive.
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	I'm just a random contributer here and when it comes to these help things, I am often not the best person to seek advice from (since I'm a total duel hipster) but I'll tell ya what I think you don't need at least. First off methinks you don't need 3 Z worlds, if it's that important add a [[Terraforming]]. Magic Drain is situationaly good so if you plan on special summoning alot from the grave, then using a card as simple as like [[Magic Jammer]] works or try and get something that can cover more then only spells; ask what is your goal when negating spells and apply a correct trap. Imperial tomb is also lackluster but with the monster you run 1 is just fine. If defence draw is only there to get a card you would place on top with plaguespredder then fine, if not then there are so many better choices. 2 Waboku's and a roar is excessive, you lack removal cards and effect protection, with solidarity you cover battle saftey decently so branch out. 2 Vampire lords is kinda much, Bluds and Curse is kinda much you don't need all that. Try getting [[Mezuki]] and [[Goblin Zombie]]...maybe a [[Shutendoji]] if you really want it. Uh not important but here's a time thingy 11:00 PM 10/13/11 Oh and yeah Offering is poinless like the guy above said. Not bad but I wouldn't say competetive.		I'm just a random contributer here and when it comes to these help things, I am often not the best person to seek advice from (since I'm a total duel hipster) but I'll tell ya what I think you don't need at least. First off methinks you don't need 3 Z worlds, if it's that important add a [[Terraforming]]. Magic Drain is situationaly good so if you plan on special summoning alot from the grave, then using a card as simple as like [[Magic Jammer]] works or try and get something that can cover more then only spells; ask what is your goal when negating spells and apply a correct trap. Imperial tomb is also lackluster but with the monster you run 1 is just fine. If defence draw is only there to get a card you would place on top with plaguespredder then fine, if not then there are so many better choices. 2 Waboku's and a roar is excessive, you lack removal cards and effect protection, with solidarity you cover battle saftey decently so branch out. 2 Vampire lords is kinda much, Bluds and Curse is kinda much you don't need all that. Try getting [[Mezuki]] and [[Goblin Zombie]]...maybe a [[Shutendoji]] if you really want it. Uh not important but here's a time thingy 11:00 PM 10/13/11 Oh and yeah Offering is poinless like the guy above said. Not bad but I wouldn't say competetive.
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