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| Ok fine, I can go with that ^. {{Unsigned|67.85.70.47|19:50, August 27, 2011}} | | Ok fine, I can go with that ^. {{Unsigned|67.85.70.47|19:50, August 27, 2011}} |
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− | Copyed from Deltaneos page (Luna's draft onwards).
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− | ::::After Leo was blown off the circut, and was saved, Luna put a hand on her heart thinking "But what was that, that feeling I felt from my heart?" (the dub drasticaly changed her words to "Thank goodness for the Crimson Dragon, he'll always save the day"). (Insert episode 78 reference).
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− | ::::After Leo awakened as a Signer, she cried tears of joy, saying he was her hero. As she said that, she had a slight infatuated look (It's to be pointed out, that she never looked at even Lester with such a look). This can however simply be taken as her being happy that her brother was alive. (Insert episode 143 reference).
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− | ::::As the gang were preparing to part ways, Luna said how much Leo has changed, even going so far as to say "You're more of a man now", and "Onii-chan" (Big brother in the Japanese). Interestingly, she has not reffered to anyone (including Lester) as "A man". (Insert episode 154 reference). [[User:Shardsilver|Shardsilver]] ([[User talk:Shardsilver|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Shardsilver|contribs]]) 22:53, December 29, 2011 (UTC)
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− | :::::Um, I may need Deltaneos to soften that up for me first... lol --[[User:Golden Key|Golden Key]] ([[User talk:Golden Key|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Golden Key|contribs]]) 23:09, December 29, 2011 (UTC)
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− | ::::::Like with "It's to be noted", I think "It's to be pointed out" and "Interestingly" at the beginning of sentences in articles are superfluous. I don't think the brackets around the two mentions of Lester are necessary either. Although, does Lester need to be mentioned in those two cases? -- [[User:Deltaneos|Deltaneos]] ([[User talk:Deltaneos|talk]]) 18:05, December 30, 2011 (UTC)
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− | :::::::What about "As she said that, she had a slight infatuated look, and her eyes were glazing at him. This can however simply be taken as her being very happy that her brother was alive", and "Until now, she had not reffered to anyone as "A man", or called Leo "Onii-chan"? [[User:Shardsilver|Shardsilver]] ([[User talk:Shardsilver|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Shardsilver|contribs]]) 18:25, December 30, 2011 (UTC)
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− | ::::::::I honestly cannot find a sub of 78 anywhere. But after reading both your comments and re-watching episode 143, this is what I've come up with for the other two:
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− | ::::::::''After Leo awakens as a Signer, Luna cries tears of joy, calling him her hero while looking at him adoringly.<nowiki><ref>{{episode|Yu-Gi-Oh!|143|ref}}
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− | </ref></nowiki><br />As the gang prepares to part ways, Luna comments on how much Leo has changed, stating that he's a man now and referring to him as "big brother".<nowiki><ref>{{episode|Yu-Gi-Oh!|154|ref}}</ref></nowiki>''--[[User:Golden Key|Golden Key]] ([[User talk:Golden Key|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Golden Key|contribs]]) 03:31, December 31, 2011 (UTC)
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− | :::::::::That sounds good to me. [[User:Shardsilver|Shardsilver]] ([[User talk:Shardsilver|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Shardsilver|contribs]]) 17:40, December 31, 2011 (UTC)
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| == Lucciano in the Relationships Section? == | | == Lucciano in the Relationships Section? == |