Forum:First Deck Attempt: Macro Monarch - rate and edit

I'm relatively new to Yu-Gi-Oh and decided to go for a Macro Monarch Deck. Here's what I have so far:
(Also first time posting here, sorry if it looks terrible or there's something wrong with the post.)

MONSTERS
3 D.D. Survivors
2 D.D. Scout Planes
1 D.D. Assailant
1 Exiled Force
1 Neo-Spacian Grand Mole
1 Spell Striker
1 Marshmallon
1 Breaker the Magical Warrior
1 Spirit Reaper
2 Zaborg the Thunder Monarchs
3 Caius the Shadow Monarchs
1 Mobius the Frost Monarch
1 Raiza the Storm Monarch
1 Helios the Primordial Sun

TRAPS
1 Mirror Force
2 Macro Cosmos
1 Sakuretsu Armor
2 Bottomless Trap Holes
1 Divine Wrath
1 Nightmare Wheel
1 Nordic Relic Laevateinn

SPELLS
3 Dimensional Fissures
1 Lightning Vortex
1 Mystical Space Typhoon
1 Enemy Controller
1 D.D.R.
1 Swords of Revealing Light
1 Soul Exchange
1 Reinforcements of the Army


Also, would this deck be fit for a local tournament? Me and a couple friends want to enter some, but we're not sure if our decks are strong enough yet because we don't have any experience.
Thanks!