Forum:Can you rate my Beatdown Please?

The Antibeatdown Beatdown

Main Deck Monster Cards 25 Mirage Dragon x2 Chainsaw Insect x2 Bull Blader x2 Legendary Jujitsu Master Big Shield Gardna Man-Eater Bug Dark Blade the Captain of the Evil World Bazoo The Soul Eater Slate Warrior Beast King Barbaros Chiron The Mage Spirit Reaper Doomcaliber Knight D.D. Assailant Caius the Shadow Monarch Chaos Hunter Ancient Gear Golem Prime Material Dragon Cyber Dragon Endless Decay Brain Crusher Mobius the Frost Monarch Spell Cards 16 Fissure Full-Force Strike x2 Lightning Vortex Mystical Space Typhoon Swords of Revealing Light Ego Boost Burden of the Mighty Dark Hole Enemy Controller Twin Swords Of Flashing Light - Tryce Cursed Armaments Axe Of Despair Creature Swap Trap Cards 6 Call Of The Haunted x2 Zoma the Spirit Sakuretsu Armor Draining Shield Waboku Extra Deck Xyz Monsters 8 Vylon Disigma Number 39: Utopia x2 Evilswarm Ouroboros Battlecruiser Dianthus Wind-Up Zenmaister Wind-Up Zenmaines Leviair the Sea Dragon

I mainly duel My best friend and he has A tournament level heiratic utilizing Tachyon and a really good beatdown, he utilizes spells and traps to kill my monsters and chip at my life points, and use his defensive monsters to clear my field and summon lots of LvL 4,5,6 monsters and blast me into the dust. haha

Anything to add or subtract? PLEASE HELP! THANKS GUYS

My rating comes not as a numeric score, but in the form of a title.

"I Have an Idea of What To Do"

There's a bit of room for improvement in what it does, but at the very least in its initial state it can carry out its beatdown well enough.

• Since this is an attempted beatdown, you will be relying a lot on an offensive pressure to keep your opponent from trying to set up on you. Remove monsters like Man-Eater Bug, Spirit Reaper and Legendary Jujitsu Master which want to stay in defense position. Besides, there are better ways of getting monsters off the field without combat.
• Next, monsters that easily Special Summon themselves while still holding good stats are favoured. More Cyber Dragons would do nicely in that department, while they serve as Tribute fodder for your bigger monsters. Things like Ancient Gear Golem are advised against unless you can bring out enough Tribute fodder to Summon it.
• It's generally considered to be far more efficient to remove the threats rather than stall for time and protect your monsters. Waboku, Draining Shield, and Swords of Revealing Light are not recommended. Replace with cards like Fissure or Sakuretsu Armor which can help destroy monsters too big for you to handle head-on.

--Gadjiltron (talk • contribs) 10:01, October 25, 2013 (UTC)

Jinzo for stopping opponents traps and Kycoo the Ghost Destroyer for stopping your opponent from banishing monsters for Chaos Sorcerer or other monsters like that.

MiikaKill (talk • contribs) 19:35, November 11, 2013 (UTC)MiikaKill