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Fire Formation - Tenki Article
Please read the above article I wrote and tell me what you guys think. I honestly think that it needs more meat, but I'm not sure what kind of extra information I could include into the article. So I need to hear your thoughts and advice, otherwise, I'm not going to upload the card page. --Dark Ace SP (Talk) 04:17, February 22, 2013 (UTC)
- Can you put quotation marks around the cards' names? I can't really put forth any suggestions or tips for this card, other than the combo with "Vorse Raider" and "Deck Destruction Virus". --UltimateKuriboh (talk • contribs) 04:27, February 22, 2013 (UTC)
- Yep, forgot the Vorse Raider and Virus combo, and I can add in the marks. --Dark Ace SP (Talk) 13:28, February 22, 2013 (UTC)
- I also added in 2 lines to kind of conclude the article, but thoughts are still welcome. --Dark Ace SP (Talk) 13:33, February 22, 2013 (UTC)
- Nice article, just two things: you said Urnight first, but then Urknight, and you could point out that unlike the other Spell-Searchers, "Tenki" stays on the field, so it can be recycled with cards like "Dewloren, Tiger King of the Ice Barrier", "Mist Valley Falcon" and "Beastlord Volcan" (ironically, a Beast, a Winged-Beast and a Beast-Warrior :D) --Missign0 (talk • contribs) 02:03, February 23, 2013 (UTC)
- Sufficient article, though I made some changes. It needed to be less chatty and repetitive. You essentially said "Let's look at what this card can do" three different ways, rather than just explaining it. I added more links to things, including the March 1st list. I also thought we might as well wait until the 1st to launch this, so I changed the opening sentence. --Golden Key (talk • contribs) 02:42, February 23, 2013 (UTC)
- Perfect, we'll wait until March to post this up, and thanks, I'm usually very repetitive in my writing style, so making it flow better is the correct thing to do. --Dark Ace SP (Talk) 03:23, February 23, 2013 (UTC)
- Fire when ready. --Golden Key (talk • contribs) 15:49, March 1, 2013 (UTC)
