Forum:What do you people think of my deck could there be any changes ?

what do you think of it so far ?

its an xyz based deck on summoning numbers 

monsters(23)

1x tour guide of the underworld 2x shining angel 2x marauding captain 1x sangan 1x cyber dragon 1x gorz emissery of darkness 1x gagaga magician 1x ganbara knight 1x warrior lady of wasteland 1x tenshin 1x gogogo golem 1x feedback warrior 1x saambell the summoner 1x marshmallon 1x shine knight 1x giant rat 1x goblinbergh 1x zubaba knight 1x field commander rahz 1x tragoedia 1x honest

spells (9) 1x mystical space typhoon 1x monster reborn 1x blustering winds 1x double or nothing 1x heavy storm 1x harmonic waves 1xthunder shot 1x swords of revealing light 1x wonder wand

traps (11) 1x utopian aura 1x seven tools of the bandit 1x limit reverse 1x icy crevasse 1x gravity bind 1x raigeki break 1x mirror force 1x mirror mail 1x scrap-iron scarecrow 1x xing zhen hu 1x enchanted javalin

extra deck (10) 1x no.39 utopia 1x no.17 leviathan dragon 1x no.34 terror-byte 1x no.10 illumiknght 1x wind up zenmaister 1x grenosaurus 1x gachi gachi gantetsu 1x adreus keeper of armageddon 1x no.c39 utopia ray

thanks for looking :) any advice greetfully recived

Um allrighty well what to say about this. You have exactly 1 target for tourguide and that alone should not warrent use of that, same goes for Saambell. You may have a few level manipulating cards but that isn't really sufficent. The targets you have for Shining Angel are well not the best to get out with him...Gogogo doesn't accomplish anything for the deck. It's better to just run Rats over Lady of the Wasteland, if you want to use both then max them out yeah. Any suggestions of multiples I would give based on how much you can spend so I won't dwelve deeper into that.

Double or Nothing! shouldn't be used and if you got enough monsters to use then nither is Harmonic. You don't need Thunder as it does not help your strategy. Also you have a very small number of targets for the wand so no to that.

Your traps...well I guess they work...at least use more staples or something.

Hmmm hard to give further input for this, apologies. 96.249.200.162 (talk) 05:19, June 22, 2012 (UTC)

Use a Template:Decklist

Use a Template:Decklist, makes it easier for people to read and want to help. ---Dark Ace SP (Talk) 17:31, June 23, 2012 (UTC)

how do you make the deck list template it's a bit confusing ?

Put the following on a page:

{{Decklist|
|monsters =
* 3 [[Rescue Rabbit]]
'''Extra Deck''' - 1 
* 1 [[Number 39: Utopia]] 
|spells = 
* 1 [[Dark Hole]]
|traps =
* 2 [[Bottomless Trap Hole]]
}} 

Creates

Just copy and paste the template, then enter in your own card data, under the right section, monsters go under Monster, Spells go under Spells, and Traps go under Traps. Remember to put brackets around cards to create links. ---Dark Ace SP (Talk) 21:55, June 23, 2012 (UTC)